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I'VE BEEN GETTING QUESTIONS ABOUT
PLOTTING STORIES FOR COMICS. So maybe a few thoughts on this
sticky subject might help you wannabe comic storytellers.
The plot is the basic idea of
the story. Big shark threatens beach community. Suicidal prince
plots against his mom and stepdad. Alien gets horny every seven
years and has to go home. The basic stuff. Your story's skeleton.
The problem is that new plots
are pretty hard to find. So you have to find a new twist on an
old one or at least a fresh approach to the formula or genre
you want to write in.
This is where most "writer's
block" comes from. The plot aspect of storytelling is the
most intimidating part of writing. If you LET it be intimidating.
The "what happens next?" part of writing doesn't HAVE
to be so scary.
Look, the painful truth is that
comics don't pay enough for me to come up with three entirely
new plots each month. Hell, Shakespeare only thought of maybe
half a dozen. Dashiell Hammett thought of two. Most writers go
their whole career and never think of one actual new plot. If
I came up with a brand new plot that'd never been done I'd go
to Hollywood or write a novel or a TV series.
But you can take a basic plot
and twist and bend it until its unrecognizable.
Try this one on for size. Take
the plot of Star Wars. Instead of being a farmboy from
another planet make him a fresh recruit in Vietnam. Obi Wan is
one of his sergeants. Darth is the other. He's drawn back and
forth between the dark and light side of things the whole while
looking for the reason why he's here. Sgt Darth kills Sgt Kenobi
and Private Luke is drawn to the Dark Side by his anger. So how
different is the basic plot of Platoon from Star Wars?
All genre fiction (including
superhero comics) has a formula. Westerns end in shootouts. Romance
stories end up with the boy and girl together or one or both
of them dead. Mysteries end with the bad guy getting his in the
end.
So if they're all the same why
do we keep reading them? Well, we love these characters, right?
But is that enough? You KNOW it's not. We want to see our favorite
guys and gals in well paced, entertaining stories that bring
out everything we love about their characters.
But how do we do this and make
it seem fresh after (in some cases) sixty plus years of continuity?
You have to hide your plot. You have to write so that your reader
is not AWARE that they're reading a story.
Howard Hawks was a film director in Hollywood's heydey. He worked
in every genre from comedy (Bringing Up Baby) to adventure (Only
Angels Have Wings) to science fiction (The Thing From Another
World). And he mastered them all because he fully understood
each of their formulas and how to bring fresh exciting ideas
to bear on them. He also understood that lightning pace and sparkling
dialogue could dress up even the oldest story.
Hawks took a sort of sabbatical
in the 1950s and spent several years in Europe not working on
any film projects at all. When he returned to the States he found
that in the years he was gone TV had gone from a novelty to America's
main source of entertainment. What shocked him most was that
the majority of programs on TV were dramas. Hour and half-hour
westerns dominated TV then. He realized that Americans were being
exposed to hours and hours of STORIES each week.
So how do you get them out of
their easy chairs and into theaters to watch yet another story?
And it was a damn western he was planning as his next
feature! Movies were getting drubbed by the boob tube. Theaters
were empty. Business was drying up. But Hawks was smart enough
to know what most Hollywood folks didn't. It wasn't 3-D or massive
spectacle or Smell-O-Vision that audiences wanted. Audiences
wanted big stars and big entertainment. But how to compete with
all that STORY on TV?
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was to hide the plot of his new movie as much as possible, to
design a story that would play out without seeming like
a story. The result was Rio Bravo. On the surface it seems
like standard western vehicle for John Wayne. But those familiar
with it see it as so much more. The move travels along at a seemingly
leisurely pace while the tension builds between the good guys
and the bad guys and good guys and each other. A romantic interest
is introduced and seems to just melt into the rest of the story
seamlessly. Even the comedy relief and (believe it or not) musical
interludes work to create atmosphere and environment. And ALL
of this serves to make the movie more of an experience
than it is a story.
And it makes Rio Bravo
the perfect model for writing comics or any other kind of serial
fiction. If you can disguise the plot so that it doesn't seem
like a tired old series of One Damn Thing After Another you can
go a long way toward keeping your readers surprised and entertained.
One way to help disguise plot
elements is to have each scene in your story accomplish two things
at once. Don't just have an action bit. Have an action bit that
says something about your character's personality. If you must
have a conversation then mix action with it. If you must have
exposition then play with it in a humorous or confrontational
way.
And avoid painful exposition
whenever possible. What's painful exposition?
"You know, Susan, that the
last time we faced Doom he shrunk Johnny to the size of an ant."
"Oh Reed, and Ben was so hurt when we had to send him away.
But what could we do? Ben might have crushed Johnny under his
big, orange, cosmic ray altered feet."
"And that's why, Susan,
my darling wife and mother of our own mutant child Franklin,
we are in such jeopardy. We need Ben's strength to combat the
Skrulls who are even now coming through the rift to the Negative
Zone created when Willy Lumpkin stumbled against the 'on' switch!"
THAT'S painful! So hide your
exposition in natural dialogue or even visuals. It flows more
naturally. That way you help your reader forget that this is
a story.
An element of comics that is somewhat unique is the longevity
of the characters. This aids in plotting as you have all that
established history to fall back on. Batman, Superman, Spider-man
and Tarzan are beloved characters. If you can locate the core
of what makes them that way you can work out plots to bring those
elements forward. Where most movie adaptations of these characters
fail is in getting too far from what made them appealing in the
first place.
So you basically play "What
If?" with these characters and there's your story. What
if Superman lost his powers? What if Spider-man got married?
What if Batman went away for a while and left his sidekicks in
charge? You can play this up and down.
Another suggestion (and one that
makes some editors nuts) is to not worry so much about your overall
plot and just sail into the story blind and work it out as you
go.
I've done this stuff long enough
that I can start with my opening and write cold to the end of
the story. I've often written the beginning of a script and then
jumped to the end and let the middle work itself out as I've
joined the two. If you're working with the classic characters
you can do this. And if there's something missing in the story
you can always go back and add it or finesse it.
Any questions? This is a big
subject and open to all kinds of confusion. So
please feel free to post on it.
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- Chuck
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